Answer to Question #137159 in English for Kayla

Question

Rewrite the following paragraph using onomatopoeia.

The boat moved through the water. The air was heavy. Birds called, and unseen creatures moved into the water. Stinging bugs flew around the boat. Suddenly, Jack heard something traveling in the dense bushes. He stifled a call when the thing came through the leaves onto the river bank. It was just his dog, Buddy!

Answer 1

The boat piddle-paddled through the water. The air was heavy. Birds chirping, and unseen creatures moved into the water. Stinging bugs flew around the boat. Suddenly, Jack heard something rustle in the dense bushes. He stifled a call when the thing rustled through the leaves onto the river bank. It was just his dog, Buddy