Answer to Question #117342 in English for maher

Question #117342
Evaluate the quality of writing in the following sentence: Although the United States is a wealthy nation, but more than 20 percent of our children live in poverty.

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2020-05-22T04:36:40-0400

Although in the sentence coordinates both the subordinate and main clauses. Therefore, incorporating ‘but’ is unnecessary and deprives the second clause of being the independent.


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