Answer to Question #95474 in English for Ayah alkinna

Question

Following the passage is a question with some students’ responses. Replace the unsatisfactory responses below with ones that are more effective and language-based. The first response gives a suggested alternative as an example.
a. This is a first person narration by the author, which draws the reader into his story.
Suggested alternative:
This is a first person narration by the author which engages immediate interest from the reader to see the events from his own perspective.
b. The writer says, ‘we would have to run the six miles to school very fast’, which explains how far he had to run.
c. The writer outlines his problems with language, which is a clever way of showing the difficulties he had to face.

d. The writer discusses the punishments he received from parents and teachers, which makes the reader want to read on.

Answer 1

Suggested Alternatives;

a. This is a first-person narration by the author engages immediate interest from the reader to see the events from his perspective.

b. The writer suggested that each one of us would run very fast for six miles to school to explain how far he could manage by running.  

c. The writer cleverly shows the difficulties he encountered with language by outlining his problems.

d. The writer discusses how the punishment he received from his parents and teachers made him wanting to read always.